jhoijhoi's review & discussion service

[quote=jhoijhoi][columns] [nextcol width=20] [nextcol width=105][center][icon=classic nasus size=100] [icon=classic ashe size=100] [icon=classic warwick size=100][/center] [nextcol width=20] [nextcol][table][tr][td width=auto][table width="auto" border="2px solid #708090" border-radius="30px" bgcolor=#708090] [tr][td width=10 height=10][/td][/tr][/table][/td] [td width=auto padding=2][size=6][color=#708090]I Will Read Your Guide[/color][/size][/td][/tr][/table] [table][tr][td bgcolor=#708090 padding=1 width="300"][/td][/tr][/table] [size=2]Welcome to my Review & Discussion Service. Previously I have +scouted guides with this shop, but this time around I'm just going to read your guide and give you a few suggestions towards improvement. Nothing huge, just short and sweet. This is your chance to get a discussion going about your guide. As we discuss your guide and you implement changes, I'll come back and drop a few more ideas or hints - just [u]@mention[/u] me to grab my attention.[/size] [table][tr][td width=auto][table width="auto" border="2px solid #708090" border-radius="30px" bgcolor=#708090] [tr][td width=10 height=10][/td][/tr][/table][/td] [td width=auto padding=2][size=6][color=#708090]The Rules I Expect You To Follow[/color][/size][/td][/tr][/table] [table][tr][td bgcolor=#708090 padding=1 width="400"][/td][/tr][/table] [size=2][color=#708090]1/[/color] Read [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/making-a-guide-101506]Making a Guide[/url]. [color=#708090]2/[/color] Use the template below to request a review. [color=#708090]3/[/color] Reply to my review on your guide to start our discussion. [/size] [table][tr][td width=auto][table width="auto" border="2px solid #708090" border-radius="30px" bgcolor=#708090] [tr][td width=10 height=10][/td][/tr][/table][/td] [td width=auto padding=2][size=6][color=#708090]Review Request Template (Copy & Paste)[/color][/size][/td][/tr][/table] [table][tr][td bgcolor=#708090 padding=1 width="400"][/td][/tr][/table] [size=2][color=#708090]1/[/color] [color=#708090]Name:[/color] [example, jhoijhoi] [color=#708090]2/[/color] [color=#708090]Link:[/color] [paste the URL to your guide here] [color=#708090]3/[/color] [color=#708090]Notes:[/color] [anything in particular you want me to know or discuss][/size] [spoiler=review request template code][code][color=#708090]1/[/color] [color=#708090]Name:[/color] [example, jhoijhoi] [color=#708090]2/[/color] [color=#708090]Link:[/color] [paste the URL to your guide here] [color=#708090]3/[/color] [color=#708090]Notes:[/color] [any information you want me to know, or anything in particular you want me to look for][/code][/spoiler] [table][tr][td width=auto][table width="auto" border="2px solid #708090" border-radius="30px" bgcolor=#708090] [tr][td width=10 height=10][/td][/tr][/table][/td] [td width=auto padding=2][size=6][color=#708090]A Little About Me - jhoijhoi[/color][/size][/td][/tr][/table] [table][tr][td bgcolor=#708090 padding=1 width="300"][/td][/tr][/table] [size=2]I'm jhoijhoi on the Oceanic (OCE) server. I was Plat 4 in Season 6. I do not claim to be an expert player at all. But I DO know what readers want and I can deliver advice regarding the [u]readability[/u] of your guide. The discussion I hope to start with you will prompt you to change small things about your guide. You lead the discussion where you want it to go, and I'll be your sounding board. [i]If this sounds like something you're interested in, feel free to request a review to start up our discussion.[/i][/size] [nextcol width=20] [nextcol width=105][center][icon=classic morgana size=100] [icon=classic malphite size=100] [icon=classic vayne size=100][/center] [nextcol width=20][/columns][/quote]

[quote=jhoijhoi][spoiler=2014][columns] [nextcol width=100][color=#0080ff][b]NAME[/b][/color] -------------------------------- jhoijhoi utopus Emikadon [nextcol width=30] [nextcol width=100][color=#ff8000][b]CHAMPION[/b][/color] -------------------------------- [url=http://images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/31600000/Pikachu-nabbing-at-apple-pikachu-31615399-895-1000.png]Pikachu Guide[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/support-morgana-who-burnt-my-cookies-387542]SR Support Morgana[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/the-tormented-protector-372317]SR Support Morgana[/url] [nextcol width=30] [nextcol width=100][color=#0080ff][b]RATING[/b][/color] ------------------------------- 9001/10 [color=#008000]7/10[/color] [color=#008000]7/10[/color] [nextcol width=30] [nextcol width=100][color=#ff8000][b]DATE[/b][/color] --------------------------- 12/09/2014 13/09/14 14/09/14 [/columns][/spoiler] [spoiler=pre2014][columns] [nextcol width=100][color=#0080ff][b]NAME[/b][/color] -------------------------------- jhoijhoi Rainfall MissMaw Viola Orpheus PsychShade morrkevi Roronoa EvrIs utopus That Trev Person CounterSnipe Nytrite NinjaNick95 -NA- Veng Lmfao XKillerMachineXx MissMaw OTGBionicArm GrandmasterD [nextcol width=30] [nextcol width=100][color=#ff8000][b]CHAMPION[/b][/color] -------------------------------- [url=http://images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/31600000/Pikachu-nabbing-at-apple-pikachu-31615399-895-1000.png]Pikachu Guide[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/they-will-fear-the-wild-a-competitive-nidalee-guide-264553]SR Bruiser Nidalee[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/kogmaw-mans-best-friend-251955]SR ADC Kog'Maw[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/sona-the-marvelous-musician-236918]SR Support Sona[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/zed-the-true-ninja-in-depth-zed-guide-264466]SR AD Zed[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/sona-the-accomplished-etwahlist-aggressive-support-guide-265876]SR Support Sona[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/ap-tank-shen-ninja-gaiden-in-lol-196144]SR AP Bruiser Shen[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/twitch-facerolling-over-the-enemy-188596]SR ADC Twitch[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/jungle-amumu-a-guide-to-depressing-your-enemies-193252]SR Jungle Amumu[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/i-jungle-jarvan-season-3-267605]SR Jungle Jarvan[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/let-me-fizz-you-up-a-fizz-guide-updated-245850]SR APC Fizz[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/season-3-jungle-amumu-offtank-ap-and-pure-ap-270317]SR Jungle Amumu[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/dragonslaying-adc-329861]SR ADC Vayne[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/immortal-skarner-336904]SR Jungle Skarner[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/youll-be-blown-away-284297]SR Support Janna[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/taric-complete-guide-to-outrageous-secret-powers-338320]SR Support Taric[/url] [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/grandmistressds-viktor-with-utmost-efficiency-287307]SR APC Viktor[/url] [nextcol width=30] [nextcol width=100][color=#0080ff][b]RATING[/b][/color] ------------------------------- 9001/10 [color=#008000]7/10[/color] [color=#008000]7.5/10[/color] [color=#008000]7.5/10[/color] [color=#008000]6/10[/color] [color=#008000]6/10[/color] [color=#008000]5.5/10[/color] [color=#008000]6.5/10[/color] [color=#ff8000]8/10[/color] [color=#008000]6.5/10[/color] [color=#008000]6/10[/color] [color=#008000]5/10[/color] [color=#008000]9/10[/color] [color=#008000]6/10[/color] [color=#008000]8/10[/color] [color=#008000]8.5/10[/color] [color=#008000]4.5/6[/color] [nextcol width=30] [nextcol width=100][color=#ff8000][b]DATE[/b][/color] --------------------------- 17/11/2012 18/11/2012 18/11/2012 18/11/2012 22/11/2012 03/12/2012 04/12/2012 04/12/2012 09/12/2012 10/12/2012 11/12/2012 11/12/2012 02/08/2013 03/08/2013 03/08/2013 03/08/2013 05/08/2013[/columns][/spoiler][/quote]

[quote=Xaioli]Guide For: Me. Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To see for flaws/criticism What I'd like you to focus on: Anything? 0.o Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/nidalee-the-way-of-the-spear-56014[/quote]

[quote=Jebus McAzn]Guide For: Me. Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: To see for flaws/criticism What I'd like you to focus on: Anything? 0.o Guide Link: http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/amumu-wrapping-up-the-jungle-37186[/quote]

[quote=Jebus McAzn]>carries harder than xaioli[/quote]

[quote=Lugignaf]I find it funny that the "pros" of the site are asking for criticism.[/quote]

[quote=Scrax]Any criticism is good criticism, Lugignaf :)[/quote]

[quote=Jebus McAzn][quote=Lugignaf] I find it funny that the "pros" of the site are asking for criticism. [/quote] gotta start somewhere right[/quote]

[quote=Bryun][quote=Lugignaf] I find it funny that the "pros" of the site are asking for criticism. [/quote] [b]Pro[/b] doesn't mean [i]perfect[/i].[/quote]

[quote=Bryun]Guide For: [[Akali]] & [[Jax]] Why I'd like this to be Reviewed: I like opinions & criticism. What I'd like you to focus on: Anything you can find. Guide Link: [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/akali-the-epitome-of-an-assassin-80578][color=#00ff00]Akali[/color][/url] | [url=http://www.mobafire.com/league-of-legends/build/jax-the-dyrus-build-92762][color=#0080ff]Jax[/color][/url][/quote]